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Refine README: tighten prose, sharpen key lines, strengthen Necessary Code distinction - #2
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[WIP] Refine existing essay-style text in README
Refine README: tighten prose, sharpen key lines, strengthen Necessary Code distinction
Jul 9, 2026
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Polishes the existing essay structure without adding sections or changing the core thesis. Targets redundancy, hedged phrasing, and the necessary-vs-avoidable complexity distinction.
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(semantic naming)parentheticals with "through semantic naming" for flow"partial names for it"→"different words pointing at the same shape"; collapse redundant "This essay calls that shape" restatement;"converge on this same shape"→"converge here""Can a second truth collapse into one?"to the deletion checklist"the local code may not be the real problem"→"the model is often the real source of complexity"— more direct, names the actual culprit"also"from"also removes guarantees"for sharpness; append"—not from avoidable structure"to the complexity sentence, making the necessary-vs-avoidable distinction explicit